Story Concept - Characters - Part 3

I got the idea for a story...thing...but I will probably never turn it into a comic so I will just submit the character designs.

The story takes place in a world where you cannot die until you've reached a certain age, also there are demons and blah blah blah. If you are killed you just live on.
Part 1: vivi1995.deviantart.com/art/St…
Part 2: vivi1995.deviantart.com/art/St…

Aaaaand some more important characters. The guy also joined the twins' group, and soon they noticed that the girl in the picture is following him...and apparently she's trying to kill him.

The background is that she is his girlfriend who is quite mad at him as he once sacrificed her to the rain/river god. (reasons are unknown) She died - and lived on of course, but she lost quite some time and her appearance was changed by the water or something...she kinda turned into a demon...haven't thought everything through yet xD
And well now she wants to take revenge.

MEEEEEH her head looks so crappy. I should have taken more time to draw her...well...too late


Characters belong to me. Please do not use without permission. (as if anyone wanted to do that...)